I. The Father, Unblinking
EXT -- THRANE’S PROPERTY -- SUNNY
Open on THRANE’S barn, paint peeling and scattered at the base
of its wall. Camera pans smoothly to ranch house, crossing an open expanse
between, in which, in mud, Thrane’s daughter is lying facedown.
It is not completely clear at first it is a body, nor does the camera
slow or break in its movement.
EXT -- FRONT -- RANCH HOUSE --DAY
Thrane is gathering together some things, tools. Tied
to a stake near the house is a puppy. It is wagging its tail, sometimes
responding to Thrane, it will try to reach him to play with him as he
passes it and in subsequent scenes. He ignores it. He starts out of
the house, into the land behind.
EXT -- RANCH HOUSE -- SIDE -- DAY
Near the corner of the house, he catches sight of his
daughter’s body. Stops dead. Setting the tools carefully down,
he moves toward it, slowly, cautiously. When he arrives beside her,
he squats down.
He stares at her back a long moment. Thrane looks at once desperately
wounded and incredibly laconic. Devastated yet extremely subdued. He
reaches down and turns her up, and she comes free with a sucking, the
air coming out of her in a sigh, blowing bubbles of mud on her lips.
He smears away the mud from around her mouth. He lays her out beside
the mud hole and works at bending the body straight. But the body doesn’t
want to stay straight, keeps slowly migrating back.
He picks her up, folds her best he can, and carries her across the yard.
He ducks under the window, hurries past a worn back stoop with the door
on top of it. Thrane kicks hens and chicks out of the way, booting loose
turbid clouds of pinfeathers.
EXT -- THRANE’S BARN -- DAY
Hooking the barn door with his boot, he hop-skips back
until it is open wide enough to let his foot free and for him to shoulder
himself and his daughter in.
INT -- BARN
It is quiet inside, and dark except for the shafts of
light from the roof traps, four long pillars of bright dust descending
to the scatterings of hay below.
He goes to the far wall and runs his eyes over the hooks
and what hangs there: shears, axe, hatchet, hacksaw, hand-saw, hand-rake,
horse-rake, pitchfork, hoe. He stands staring, running his eyes over
them again from the beginning. He looks over each shoulder in turn,
turns in a slow circle in the half-dark of the barn, and walks jaggedly
around the barn, kicking apart the damp clumps of hay that coats his
boots in a yellow mold.
Moving hay in loads across the uneven dirt with his boots, he drags
some together in a pile at the far wall and puts her atop the pile.
He brushes the dirt off the dress, pulls the socks up past the calves
again, loosens the buckles of the blunt-ended shoes. He scoops up an
armload of hay and dumps it on top of her.
INT -- RANCH HOUSE -- STOOP -- DAY
Coming back to the house, he scrapes the soles of his
boots on the edge of the stoop. He stamps a few times, pulls the screen
open, goes in.
INT -- RANCH HOUSE -- KITCHEN
WIFE is cutting venison into thin strips.
WIFE
Your shoes good?
THRANE
Yes. Boots.
WIFE
Better be.
She turned in a squint toward him, hands red. He holds
on to the end of the counter and lifts first one foot, then the other.
WIFE (cont’d)
Pass. (goes back to cutting)
THRANE
Seen my spade? The long-handed job?
WIFE
What for? What do I want with it?
THRANE
You seen it or not?
WIFE
You lent it out to Quade. Your mind’s a blunt one today.
THRANE
I reckon it haent, Quade, is it?
WIFE
Heard me, or didn’t you?
He watches her shoulder blades shiver beneath the dress
with each blow. He does not say anything.
WIFE (cont’d)
You seen your little lullaby?
He pushes open the screen. Stops.
THRANE
I haent seen her.
WIFE
She still feeling better? You think it going to stick this time?
Thrane shrugs.
WIFE (cont’d)
We probably should have called Daddy Norton to bless her.
THRANE
Maybe so.
WIFE
Any case, she shouldn’t be out running around so much so soon.
You tell her get her butt here, you see her.
THRANE
I haent seen her. (pushing out onto the stoop,
letting the screen clap to.)(loudly) You know where I’m off.
WIFE
(calling) I know where.
INT -- BARN
Thrane goes into the barn, to the far wall, and takes down the hoe.
Uncovering the girl’s face, he looks at her, then covers her quickly
over again. He goes out with the hoe in his hands.
EXT -- BARN -- DAY
Drawing the doors shut, he jams the handle of the hoe through the aligned
rings. Grunting, he shakes the doors, pulls on their handles.
INT -- PICKUP TRUCK
He gets into his truck, starts it. It starts immediately
without difficulty, the engine noise strong and regular.
EXT -- RURAL ROAD --DAY
He drives the pickup truck down the road a little way,
parks it at the entrance of a dirt path leading off the road.
EXT -- DIRT PATH -- DAY
He sets off down the path, walking on the mounded sides
instead of down in the ruts. The mud in the low spots is drying up,
going white and hard. He walks a sunlit five hundred feet down slope
to QUADE’S fence.
EXT -- QUADE’S GATE -- DAY
There are ants aswarm on the fence, darkening the knotty
rails. He opens it gingerly, walks down a dirt path towards a barn.
Stops in barn doorway.
EXT -- QUADE’S BARN -- DAY
THRANE
(from the door) Hey Quade.
INT -- QUADE’S BARN
Quade looks up from the box he is nailing, his half-gaunt
face red and stringy, lumpy as the flesh of an old rabbit slaughtered
too late.
QUADE
Bet I know what you’re after.
THRANE
(entering barn) Bet you do.
Quade spits nails into the box, drops his hammer on the
dirt. He rubs the sweat off his neck, undoes his bags to let them slide
off his waist down to the floor. He goes to a corner which sprouts handles.
Messing about for a bit, he pulls forth an axe from the angry snarl.
THRANE (cont’d)
That mine?
QUADE
Isn’t it?
THRANE
Hell, (spitting) I come for the spade.
QUADE
(sqinting, looking at the axe) Well, whose the hell is this?
Thrane shrugs.
Quade goes back to the snarl, fishes around, pokes his way through it,
drawing out tool after tool, leaning them in a row. His hands hanging
loose, he stands staring at the row of handles stacked stiff against
the mold-blistered wall.
QUADE (cont’d)
Well I’ll be damned if I know where it got to.
THRANE
Got to have it today.
QUADE
What you need it for?
THRANE
Digging.
QUADE
Digging what?
THRANE
Just digging.
Quade shakes his head and goes out of the barn. Thrane scavenges loose
a quarter sheet of plywood from underfoot, throws it on top of the box,(which
is the rough beginnings of a coffin - this shouldn’t start to
be evident, until Quade begins speaking below), and eases his full weight
down upon it. The wood has been ripped ragged on one end, leaving a
furry edge. Bending down, he picks up the hammer, hefts it, lets it
fall onto the dirt. He stares at his big, empty hands.
Quade comes back in, shovel in hand. He stops moving at the sight of
Thrane.
QUADE
Can’t say it is good luck to be sitting on that,
even with the plywood between.
THRANE
It don’t matter, Quade. It really don’t.
Quade shrugs. Thrane takes his time to stand up and reach
for the shovel.
QUADE
How’s the wife?
THRANE
(taking the shovel) Good.
QUADE
The girl,
THRANE
(slow to respond) Sick.
QUADE
You take care of those two.
THRANE
You got it. (walking out the door.)
EXT -- QUADE’S BARN -- DAY
Thrane walks towards gate.
EXT -- QUADE’S GATE -- DAY
Opening the latch with his shovel blade, he lets the ant-ridden gate
swing his way. He goes through, on the other side turning the shovel
scoop-down and reaching back over the gate with it, dragging it back,
pulling the gate closed.
EXT -- DIRT PATH -- DAY
He swings the shovel up over his shoulder and makes his way, through
the heat, to the truck.
INT -- PICKUP TRUCK
It starts smoothly. He drives home.
EXT -- RANCH HOUSE -- DRIVEWAY
When, home, he turns off the engine, gets out, he hears his wife calling
out his daughter’s name:
WIFE
Lyndi! (pause) Lyndi!
EXT -- PATH -- DAY
He rounds the bend to see the house in front of him,
his wife standing in front of it, hands cupped around her face.
EXT -- RANCH HOUSE -- DAY
WIFE
(to Thrane) You seen her?
THRANE
I haent seen.
WIFE
Where in hell?
He shrugs.
WIFE (cont’d)
(pointing to the barn doors) What of that hoe there?
THRANE
I put it there.
WIFE
What about it?
He shrugs.
EXT -- THRANE’S BARN -- DAY
He walks over to the barn doors and pulls the hoe handle out of the
rings, leaving a long streak of rust on it. He steps inside and pulls
the door shut.
INT -- BARN
Hanging the hoe back where it goes, he paces out the floor and starts
to dig, heaping the dirt against the wall.
Banging the shovel clean on the side of the hole, he hangs it in its
proper place. He sprinkles the bottom of the hole with hay, dropping
in handfuls. He digs through the hay, pulling out the body, jaundiced
now with grain dust. He kneels, lowers it in. Thrane gets the shovel
and drags the dirt back in over it with the shovel blade, stamps the
grave down, kicks the rest of the dirt around the barn until it is no
longer visible.
Thrane puts the shovel away. He leaves the barn.
EXT -- RANCH HOUSE -- STOOP -- DAY
His wife is standing on the stoop, looking out into the
low, clear sun.
WIFE (cont’d)
What you been doing?
THRANE
Nothing.
WIFE
Thinking?
He looks at her for a long time, thinking, trying to understand what’s
going through her mind.
THRANE
Thinking.
WIFE
About what?
THRANE
About nothing.
WIFE
You know what I been thinking about?
THRANE
I can guess.
WIFE
Where could she be?
Thrane doesn’t answer.
WIFE (cont’d)
You think we give the sheriff a call?
THRANE
No.
WIFE
You seen her?
THRANE
No.
WIFE
You going to look for her?
He does not answer. He looks at what the sun is doing
through the aspens. He looks at the way the stoop has grown worn underfoot,
and at the difference in how the sun shines off the rough spots.
WIFE (cont’d)
Will you look for her?
THRANE
I will not.
WIFE
Look at me to tell me.
He turns to face her, turns all the way around, dragging his boots until
he is facing straight at her. He opens his eyes all the way open and
stares her in both her eyes. He looks at her in the eyes and looks at
her, and looks at her, without blinking, until it is she who blinked
and, pale, turns away.
FADE OUT. |